Large case study of Guthy Runker-site already secured. Seems to have a very large scope to the dissertation. May need to be narrowed; particularly in the theoretical frame. Suggests several, distinct theoretical approaches but it is not clear which he will use. Advisor suggests he will complete in 2012. Very active in scholarship - reviewer, published.
Would be easier to understand with some examples or more specifics of the phenomenon he's talking about. Seems a bit hyperbolic, jargony and impressionistic in use of theory.
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Large case study of Guthy
Large case study of Guthy Runker-site already secured. Seems to have a very large scope to the dissertation. May need to be narrowed; particularly in the theoretical frame. Suggests several, distinct theoretical approaches but it is not clear which he will use. Advisor suggests he will complete in 2012. Very active in scholarship - reviewer, published.
Really strong letter and
Really strong letter and impressive record. I think he'll benefit from the consortium.
Would be easier to understand
Would be easier to understand with some examples or more specifics of the phenomenon he's talking about. Seems a bit hyperbolic, jargony and impressionistic in use of theory.